Monday, 29 October 2018

Dogs at the beach!

Hey guys this will be about a story about dogs at the beach as you can see the title.But this story is actually made by me so yeah hope you guys enjoy reading my story about dogs at the beach.It was challenging because I didn't think of interesting words so I used the padlet. My next steps is to use more punctuation . This is a screenshot by the way.

1 comment:

  1. Thanks for sharing Lillian. I like the way you can explain what you've done well and what your next steps are!